Extreme Poverty And Hunger
This video is about hunger and poverty. The reason why I
have chosen this video is that this matter is quite important and it should be
handled as soon as possible. Besides this reason, it is a matter on which
making comment is easy and it is a world problem. The video maker states that
not everyone lives in a nice home and eats meals three times a day .That is
what everyone knows but not pipe up. S/he tells the situation of poor people
with some pictures in which we can see them in such a bad condition. They are
about to die because of malnutrition. The maker of the video supports the idea
with mathematical data. These mathematical data are pretty sad since the number
of poor people is high. The video maker says they cannot go to school because
it is expensive. According to me it cannot be even the case since they struggle
to fulfill their basic needs like obtaining food, housing and health care. We
cannot expect them to go school or do any activity while they are just
struggling to live. The poverty is caused because of economic and unequal
social status. While they are on the threshold of dying, some people spend
their money on nonsense things which they do not need. The video maker also
gives us advice to increase the number of poor people. S/he tells us to donate
organizations like UNICEF and spread the things happening throughout the globe.
S/he finished it by saying there is still hope at the end of tunnel. I agree
with him/her. There is always a way to figure things out, it just requires
awareness.
Dear Mate !
YanıtlaSilI would like to say that I really enjoyed while reading your ideas. You have mentioned about good point : hunger and poverty. We should be sensible about this subject. You have summed up the ideas of the video clearly. There are no irrelevant sentences in your work, so it is coherent and unified. With respect to your language use, there are no ungrammatical structures which I am aware of. I am looking forward to reading your next journals